Thread: Apreciare mucho su ayuda

Mi nombre es Paul Briceno y acabo de terminar una pagina web, es acerca de un tutorial para personas que estan interesadas a hablar español. La ayuda que necesito es que me revisen y corrigan el contenido de la primera pagina que esta en ingles, con lo que se refiere a gramatica y quizas oraciones que no hagan sentido, aqui les dejo lo que escribi y muchas gracias de antemano.

Why the Spanish to English translation Google tool it is becoming very popular these days, well I would say there is two major reasons for that, first one is the accuracy to translate of this tool, I think it is more effective than the others translators around that cost you money to try, the second reason, it is FREE, yes 100% FREE and this one is the favorite for many people.
My name is Paul Briceno and I am a native Spanish speaker. I would like to share with you the tips and techniques that I used to learn English.
First I'll like to talk about translators, they may perhaps be the favorite tool that can people use to make things easier but they are not really helpful if you are trying to learn a new language, I am not against them to the contrary I think that those are great tools and we can take advantage of those but wisely specially if they are FREE, like the one I'd mention above from Google.
I am saying that translators are not helpful if we are trying to learn a new language, simply because we let the translator to do all the work for us and this way we will not learn that really much, I think the best way to use a translator if we decided to use it as a tool to learn a new language, is as a dictionary.
Another thing and I believe did help me to learned English as a second language faster, it was actually not translating nothing or anything at all, simply thinking in the language, identifying items by just looking at it, do not try to translate in your brain what is the item name it, for example if you see a table just make sure that is not a table but is a "mesa" it may sound difficult to do it but with practice you can master anything.
Watching television, listening to radio stations, reading books even if you do not understand some words (use a translator here) in the language you want to learn. Doing those things frequently, will definably help your understanding to identify actions and items.
Learning your new language from someone that speaks native it is very helpful for your accent.
If you want to learn Spanish, I can help you if you are committed to do so, and just to let you know, I am not trying to sell any course here, this is just my contribution to the community since that this great country open their doors for me to achieve my goals in life.
The way that I am going to share this with you is by challenge you for the next 30 days and is not that I want to demonstrate you that those techniques works but it is that you will demonstrate to yourself that you can master anything with only practice.
To get results you must need to watch the videos and read the lessons out loud every day for the next 30 days, even if you do not understand what you are saying at the beginning.
If you want to make any comments to improve this program or perhaps need some help, please feel free to speak up your mind but I will not tolerate any spammers, by the way this is a "no follow" link site.
Well without anything else to say at this moment, let's begin this journey and have fun with it! Thank you for visited my site.

Hola Paul,
Good luck with your web page; you are doing a great thing for the community. Below are some general corrections which were made without trying to influence your style.
Saludos y muy buena suerte con su página.

Why is Google's Spanish to English translation tool becoming very popular these days? Well, I would say there are two major reasons for this; first is this tool's accuracy in translating. I think it is more effective than others translators around that cost you money to try. The second reason is that it is FREE, yes 100% FREE, which is many people's favorite reason.
My name is Paul Briceno and I am a native Spanish speaker. I would like to share with you the tips and techniques that I used to learn English.
First, I'll like to talk about translators. Perhaps they are people´s favorite tool to use to make things easier, but they are not really helpful if you are trying to learn a new language. I am not against them; on the contrary I think that they are great tools and we can take advantage of them especially if they are FREE, like the one I mentioned above from Google.
I am saying that translators are not helpful if we are trying to learn a new language, simply because we let the translator to do all the work for us and this way we will not really learn that much. I think the best way to use a translator, if we decide to use it, is as a dictionary.
Another thing which I believe did help me to learn English as a second language faster, was actually not translating anything at all, but simply thinking in the language and identifying items by just looking at them, without trying to translate in my brain the name of the item. For example if you see a table, don't think of it as a "table" but rather a "mesa". It may sound difficult to do it but with practice you can master anything.
Watch television, listen to radio stations, and read books, even if you do not understand some words (use a translator here in the language you want to learn). Doing those things frequently will definitely help your understanding to identify actions and items.
Learning your new language from a native speaker is very helpful for your accent.
If you want to learn Spanish, I can help you if you are committed to do so, and just to let you know, I am not trying to sell any course here; this is just my contribution to the community since this great country opened her doors for me to achieve my goals in life.
The way that I am going to share this with you is to challenge you for the next 30 days. It is not that I want to demonstrate to you that these techniques work, but that you will demonstrate to yourself that you can master anything with enough practice.
To get results you need to watch the videos and read the lessons out loud every day for the next 30 days, even if you do not understand what you are saying at the beginning.
If you want to make any comments to improve this program or perhaps need some help, please feel free to speak your mind, but I will not tolerate any spammers. By the way, this is a "no follow" link site.
Well, without anything more to say at this moment, let's begin this journey and have fun with it! Thank you for visiting my site.

Muchisimas gracias Christina, en realidad aprecio su ayuda.

No hay de qué, Paul. Quizá me pueda ayudar con el español! :-)

Definitivamente que lo hare, porsupuesto hasta lo que se, Gracias.

Gracias Xochitl L. Eres muy amable agradeco tu ayuda. Mi apellido es Briceño pero despues de haber vivido algun tiempo en Estados Unidos me acostumbre a Briceno e incluso cuando me dieron mi certificado de naturalizacion para ser ciudadano estadounidense, por la costumbre hize que me pusieran Briceno, pero siempre lo pronuncio como Briceño. Gracias otra vez !

Paul,
I would go with Cotty's version. It is the most polished! :-)
Saludos

Originally Posted by Christina

Paul,
I would go with Cotty's version. It is the most polished! :-)
Saludos

Opino lo mismo...

Xóchitl