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System technical features
The system is developed under the Oracle, which is a powerful relational database management system, and it runs on a variety of platforms. This system has a delightful graphic interface that allows end users to adapt rapidly to its use.
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Users will be able to browse into the system according to the profile assigned by the DBA(Data Base Administrator).
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"The system is developed under the Oracle...."
I would say "IN Oracle" or better yet, "On an Oracle platform"
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I think Victoria's option is correct.
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Gracias, lo modificaré por "On an Oracle platform"
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I agree with Victoria and Andrea regarding "on an Oracle platform". My question is about "delightful"...what exactly are you trying to express there? Delightful really does stand out when talking about a database management system.
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Hola ScottJ,
En este caso hablo de la interfaz grafica, y quiero decir mas o menos los siguiente:
"Este sistema tiene interfaz grafica agradable que permite al usuario adaptarse rápidamente al uso del mismo o a su uso”
Saludos
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Quizás querrás decir "user-friendly"
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User-friendly se refuere mas que todo a la facilidad del manejo del sistema por parte del usuario . La palabra delightful no está mal, y también podrías usar el término "magnificent" si te refieres a la calidad de la interfaz o "attractive" si quieres resaltar lo llamativo de los gráficosOriginally Posted by patriciabr
Saludos
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