Thread: Phone interview

Hola, me estoy preparando una entrevista en ingles por telefono, y estoy poniendo en escrito lo que fue mi vida profesinal, un pequeño resumen. Me gustaría que mas o menos fuese gramticalmente correcta y si se entiende lo que quiero decir, es lo primero, luego ya, mejoraremos la gramática.

¿Se entiendo loque quiero decir?¿que frases son las que no se entiende nada?¿que frases carecen de significado?

Muchas gracias.

I'm unemployed and now I'm in looking of employment.
I believe my strengths are I am innovative, creative, … I like resolve computer problems with algorithms.
When I finished the University and the obligatory military service, I begun to work in Acme 1. Here, I worked like developer in a project for client Acme 2. The tools I used was Visual c++ with mfc, Informix and ODBC.
I was in Acme 3 during one year and a half.
Then, I begun to work in Apex. I was in a Acme 3 project using c++ under unix. Here, I was during one year. I went out from Acme 4 because I hadn't any responsibilities about the software design.
Then, I started in Acme 5 . Here I have the responsible of developing a component for viewing the Murcia's terrain in 3D. The colors of the terrain was the different kinds of vegetation. So, you can see where there was more pine, fir, chestnut,.. .I used visual c++, openGL and ATL.
Then, I went to Acme 6. Here, I was responsible of developing a component for rendering the road design and terrain around in 3D with OpenGL. You can visit my personal web for seeing some screenshots. I used visual c++, OpenGL and Constraint Delaunay Triangulation.
In this company I was during one year and a half. They fired out me because the process of triangulation was a little bit slow. 300.000 triangles in 2 minutes, and they wanted in a few seconds. And now, I believe, how do more fast the process of triangulation, sort the terrain points.
After, I worked in Acme 6 like a analist/computer. I fixed the bugs of the goaldriver software. This software optimize resources and services, how optimize? of the way more cheaper for the company. Examples for optimizing, drivers and buses. The software assigned the drivers at the buses of the way more optimize..
During one year I have been read computer books and developing some software which you can see on my personal web.

Aca van algunas correcciones de la mitad de tu redacción.

Aca tenés algunas correcciones. El resto creo que podrías verlo con un profesor particular y asi todo tendriamos mas oportunidad de trabajo.
Hope you do well.

I'm unemployed AT THE MOMENT I AM LOOKING FOR A JOB
REGARDING MY STRENGTHS I THINK THAT I AM INNOVATIVE, CREATIVE AND I AM KEEN ON RESOLVING.......
When I finished University and the obligatory military service, I BEGAN to work FOR Acme 1. WHERE I DEVELOPED A PROJECT..... The tools I used was Visual c++ with mfc, Informix and ODBC.
I WORKED FOR Acme 3 FOR A YEAR and a half.
Then, I BEGAN to work FOR Apex. I was INVOLVED IN AN Acme 3 project IN WHICH IUSED c++ under unix. I STAYED IN THIS COMPANY FOR A year. AND I LEFT BECAUSE I DIDN'T FEEL HAPPY WITH WHAT I WAS DOING . I WOULD HAVE LIKED TO TAKE ON MORE RESPONSIBILITY FOR software design.