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Cuando tenia 10 anos yo vivia en Mexico y iva en la primaria me encantaba jugar con mis amigas ellas se llaman Luz y Christina y mi maestra se llamaba Claudia mi favorita materia era historia porque haciamos viajes a museo y descubrias muchas cosas muy interesantes las actividades que yo estaba involucrada eran en los festivales de la escuela en donde hacias presetanciones tales como el dia de la madre y otros eventos .



When I was 10 years old I was living in Mexico and I was in the elementary school loving playing with my friends one of my friend is Luz and the other was Christina and my teacher was Claudia my favorite subjet was a history because we were doing trips to museum and you were discovering many very interesting things and the acctivities that was involved was in the festivals of the school where you were doing presentations such as the day of the mother and other events.


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When I was 10 years old, I lived in Mexico. I was in elementary school and loved playing with my friends. My friends were named Luz and Christina, and my teacher was Claudia. My favorite subject was history. This was because we made trips to the museum where we discovered many interesting things. Some activities at the school were festivals in which presentations were given such as one about Mothers’ Day and other events.

Hi crazy4, I think both Vicente's version (back in legal) and gernt's here are enough for you to improve your paragraph.

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