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Re: my friendly neighbor will have to deal whit it (?)
Estoy contigo, California.
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Re: my friendly neighbor will have to deal whit it (?)
Sí claro,Hola Exx
Me gusta tu versión. Suena mejor pero pepernauta dice que quiere solo 5 o 6 sílabas por línea.
" why I just can't follow rules" debe ser "why can't I just follow rules", no?
Veamos, cinco o seis sílabas:
¿Qué te parece Peper?I just can't get enough
no, I want more and more<---------- o : I always want more
I don't understand
why I can't follow rules
Re: my friendly neighbor will have to deal whit it (?)
jajajaja ningún problema solo que para eso tendrían que venir a Buenos Aires Argentina y firmar como coautores de la letra...jajajaja y solo pueden firmar tres personas en la letra y tres en la música!! jajaja dieron buenas opciones,
pero...la estructura es así...
la primera linea
Can't get enough (puede tener 5 o 6 sílabas)por lo tanto "I can't get enough" puede entrar en la métrica rítmica,también "Can't get as much"
la segunda linea puede tener hasta 10 sílabas
no! the more i get the more i want ----creo que esta frase esta bien, realmente es necesario cambiarla "no, I just want more and more" podría funcionar al igual que, "I want even more than what I possess"...repito, la frase "the more i get the more i want" realmente necesita ser cambiada por otra? porque me gusta, es una expresión que no se usaría? es literalmente "mientras mas tengo mas quiero"
i don't understand ---"can't comprehend this mess" me gusta...pero no se si "i don't understand" necesita ser cambiado...en función de que dice -no puedo entender, y no "no puedo comprender este desastre"
why can't I go by the book...(esta mal la expresión dicha de esta manera?) "why I just can't follow rules" puede ser un remplazo
"why can't I behave decently!" me gusta también puede ser una opción
podría quedar así
I can't get enough
I want even more than what I possess
I don't understand
why can't I behave decently
o
I can't get enough
No! the more I get the more I want
I don't understand
why I just can't follow rules
luego sigue
I wish I could fly
Out in the sky
but when I try
I fall so hard
Last edited by exxcéntrica; 05-23-2014 at 07:10 AM. Reason: spelling, I hope you don't mind
Re: my friendly neighbor will have to deal whit it (?)
can't comprehend this mess = I cannot understand this situation. A situation that is very complicated or difficult to deal with.
Re: my friendly neighbor will have to deal whit it (?)
Flying is my desire
up in the firmament
but when I attempt it
hard I plummet
Re: my friendly neighbor will have to deal whit it (?)
There is always a solution for everything. We can form a company and the company rep can sign ... :-)
Re: my friendly neighbor will have to deal whit it (?)
I second that
Re: my friendly neighbor will have to deal whit it (?)
jajajaja noooo! the lyrics are mine, mine only, my precious!!! (gollum) jajajajajajajajajaja....the song can be shit...are you shure you want a piece of it jajajajajajaja
sigo con la duda de si realmente esta frase necesita ser cambiada
"the more I get the more I want" que tiene de malo?
Last edited by pepernauta; 05-23-2014 at 11:34 AM.
Re: my friendly neighbor will have to deal whit it (?)
Remember Carole King's I feel the earth move when she says "I feel the sky tumbling down...". You can also use that for people tripping over or falling down.
Also, I would say "Listening to people, all sounds the same..." as it may fit with the beat of the song.
Re: my friendly neighbor will have to deal whit it (?)
I beginning to think we're being slicked.
vicente
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