Thread: Please, pleaseeee help me translate this!

I have a very important letter i am writing and though i know Spanish fairly well, it's the word order that really messes me up! I am writing to someone who understands ONLY spanish, so it's important that i get this right! If anyone can pleaseee help me, tell me if this is correct/how to fix the few little things that are not, i will send it to you and be forever thankful!

Hi! You can copy here those parts that you need help with, and we may be able to help you out.