Thread: word order

Hola chicos,
Me podrían ayudar con estas dos dudas:

The hypothesis of this work is to show (is there a better verb) that the State and the insurance private market (the private insurance market) or(the private market of insurance?) had a great need of having an organization like IMAR. This need is confirmed through the empirical demonstration (is there a better noun like proof)of the compliance with the Law 12.988, which called a halt to the continuous outflow of currencies
La hipótesis del trabajo es demostrar la absoluta necesidad que tenía el Estado Nacional y el mercado privado de seguros, de contar con un organismo como el IMAR. Dicha necesidad se ve confirmada mediante la demostración empírica del cumplimiento de la Ley 12.988, lo cual significó el fin del continuo drenaje de divisas
Mil gracias como siempre

Originally Posted by vicente

Hola Diego:

Suggestions:

The hypothesis of this work is to (illustrate, demonstrate, validate, authenticate, confirm) that the State and the private insurance market required/demanded an organization like the IMAR. This need has been confirmed by the practical observation, confirmation of the compliance with the Law 12.988, which put a stop to the continuous outflow of currencies.

Hi vicente and Diego: I have adeventured some more changes. What do you think?

Exx y Vicente
Una vez más muchas gracias, ustedes jutnos con un par mas de miembros siempre me ayudan. Gracias, gracias, gracias. Que tengan un buen día. DIEGO

Siempre un placer, diego.