Thread: Is this correct? ... thanks

Originally Posted by A577689

Querido amor como te extraño, el tiempo me parece que no camina cuando estoy lejos de ti los dias se me hacen eternos por fin en pocos dias seremos marido y mujer y solo faltaran algunos meses mas para estar juntos compartiendo una vida juntos lo bueno y lo malo espero que te puedas acostumbrar a mi pues yo a veces soy un poquito pesada pero sabes que muy cariñosa tambien asi que una cosa salva a la otra.

El domingo cuando te llame moria de las ganas de hablar contigo de oir tu voz me encanta sentir esto pues asi me siento viva y llenar de amor para ti, envia saludos y besos de mi parte a tus padres y para ti el mayor de todos los besos.

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Dear love ... how I miss you. The time seems (to stand still)when I am far from you. The days are endless to me, in a few days we will (finally) be husband and wife and then (after only a few more months we'll) be together sharing a life both good and bad. I hope you can get (used) to me since I'm sometimes a little bit (difficult) but you know I'm very affectionate as well, so one thing overcomes (offsets?) the other.

On Sunday when I called you, I was dying ... to talk with you, to hear your voice. I love this feeling because I feel so alive and filled with love for you. I send greetings and kisses ... to your parents and for you the biggest of all kisses.

A577689: Overall, a very good translation. I have changed a few things to make it sound more natural in English.