Thread: Could you help me with another song, please?

Hi
I think it's right but I wanna be sure.

Where are you going with that suitcase?
I told you last time I saw you there
I sold the house and moved to other
it was a depressing jail

you broke down all the pictures and run away burning
there was someone waiting at the door
I was standing at the corner feeding your eyes... so cold

I'm falling down my Grace
falling in these days
I'm falling down my Grace
I need your spell

Now I'm bored, no one makes jokes
no one really listens to me
crying alone I play this love song
would you go back there?

I've tried, I've tried to be a good man
this morning I awake in madness

I'm falling down my Grace
can you hear my prayer?
I'm falling down my Grace
I need your skills

I'm falling down my Grace
can you hear my prayer?
I'm falling down my Grace
Beautiful Grace

is it really done?
are you really gone?
I wanna hear you love

Thanks

Normally, we'd say "you took down all the pictures and ran away burning". But in a song, I'm not sure that is so important, and it might even add meaning the way it is. We use "to break down" to mean someone begins to cry.

I guess this is a song in spanish and you are translating it to english so if i had that lil peace of the spanish song i would be able to help you a lil bit more. But so far it sounds great man =p