Thread: Ayuda urgente!!

Hola, necesito ayuda con la traducción de un texto urgente.
Si alguien me puede ayudar.

El texto:
Muy buenas noches, damas y caballeros.
La noche se viste de gala, de luces y colorido.
Nos complace en presentarles un espectaculo en el que se hara muestra del arte y de la maestria de la alta escuela.
El centro hipico de alcala se enorgullece de que formen parte de este mundo tan fantastico y tan nuestro.
Esperamos que disfruten esta noche dedicada a todos ustedes.
Que comience el espectaculo.

Originally Posted by gernt

Good Evening Ladies and Gentlemen:


And this evening is very well dressed in lights and colors. It pleases us to present you a special in which we will show you some of the artistry and mastery of the (our?) high school. The equestrian center of Alcala is proud to be a part of this fantastic world of ours. We hope that you enjoy this, a night dedicated to all of you.

Let the spectacle begin.

No sería mejor : We are pleased to present you... ?? A ver...

Cuidado que high school es como colegio o secundario.
Raul, que queres decir por alta escuela ? Is it more like prestigious/important/notarious school ? En este sentido, hablas de alta escuela ?
Gracias por guiarnos...

Saludos

I agree with Kainu's suggestions :-)

I would only change the final line, simply to:

Let the show begin

Originally Posted by mvictoria

I agree with Kainu's suggestions :-)

I would only change the final line, simply to:

Let the show begin

Si esa la ví despues.
It sounds much more fluent and native like that

Thx

Good evening ladies and gentleman:

The evening is dressed up with its best clothes, lights and bright colours. We are pleased to present a special in which it will be shown an exhibition of art and skills of the training school.
The equestrian center of Alcalá is proud of you to be part of such a fantastic world of ours.
We hope that you enjoy this evening, dedicated to all of you.
Let the show begin!

Originally Posted by coolguava

Good evening ladies and gentleman:

The evening is dressed up with its best clothes, lights and bright colours. We are pleased to present a special in which it will be shown an exhibition of art and skills of the training school.
The equestrian center of Alcalá is proud of you to be part of such a fantastic world of ours.
We hope that you enjoy this evening, dedicated to all of you.
Let the show begin!

Disculpe, pero por favor no agreguen errores :
gentleman --> gentlemen

Por el resto, diría que un nativo nos quitará todas las dudas...

Jajaja lo siento, se me paso lo de gentlemen... Gracias por las correciones!!