Thread: Correct my mistakes...

It’s difficult to know what one would do in this moment. I suppose they would be paid well for doing the experiment but, even so, I believe I would have stopped the experiment because I couldn’t (wouldn't want to) cause another person pain, even if a person with authority was ordering me to do it.[/QUOTE]

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It's difficult to know what I would do in this situation. I suppose subjects in this experiment would be well paid, but even so, I believe I would have stopped the experiment because I wouldn't want to cause another person pain, even if a person with authority was ordering me to do it.

It's difficult to know what people would do in this situation. Although subjects are probably well paid, they might stop the experiment because they wouldn't want to cause another person pain, even if a person with authority was ordering them to do it.

It's difficult to know what one would do in this situation. I suppose despite being paid well for doing the experiment, a subject might stop the experiment to avoid causing another person pain, even if a person with authority was giving orders to do it.