Thread: Homework help 2

I have a graded homework assignment due I need a proofread on some sentences that i wrote. Please revise in the most simple way possible.

thanks

7. Yo salgo mi casa por la escuela y yo trabajo en la cafeteria.

8. Yo trabajo con Charlie, Walter, Roger y los mujeres muchos.

9. Nosotros hacemos la comida mucho por los estudiantes mil o mas.

10. Después yo trabajo yo regreso la casa.

11. Yo me quito la ropa de trabajo y yo pongo en el piso.

12. Yo entro en el baño y ducho.

13. Yo lavo el cuerpo con el jabon de neutrogena.

Hello,

I just wanted to point out that number 8 could also be, depending upon the context:

"Trabajo mucho con..." etc.

If you're indeed saying that you work with many women, I agree with the translation / revision above! However, if you're emphasizing that you work often or a lot, and it happens to be alongside women, then I'd go with the second.

Hope this was helpful and keep up the good work!

Un saludo

I initially read number 11 as you take the clothes off and put them on the floor, which would read "Me quito la ropa de trabajo y LA pongo en el piso."